
The Sunday Whirl, Wordle #70
A dwindling summer
is the bittersweet prelude to fall.
I am watching it all,
just now, and sense already, on the tip of
my tongue, the tinny, metallic
taste of winter. In my mind’s eye:
the deep greens and subtler hues
fading to brown, drying up,
the sharp blades of grass pricking
the soles of my stubborn-bare feet,
knowing that in due time, drifts of snow
will cover all that’s left of now. My ears
are preparing for the day when they will
be turned to the laboring creak of
ice-burdened limbs, fixed upon the splintering crack,
then chuffing thud of branches,
falling to the snow-smothered ground below.
Such insidious, gray thoughts are snatched away
by the appearance of a swallow-tailed butterfly.
Slower than the hastening summer and onrushing winter,
she gently makes her way from leaf to blossom,
in a logical path she alone chooses, in full knowledge
of the passing of her season of glory.
So vivid the colors – the tints and shades
of her first morning still shine on her last.
I wonder at such persistence through the
fraying nicks of daily struggle,
and sigh at her beauty – at the
constant push and pull against the wayward
currents of air – of her split and tattered wings.
I wish you all, my Gentle Readers, the abundance of enough. . .

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You’ve made me recapture a lucky moment I had the other day when I saw a yellow and purple/dark swallowtail and a monarch all at the same time at my purple butterfly bush…
Trying to get in a few more reads before looking at the early list…
my last piece – a continuance of the story verse is here:
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/08/sw-70-feathers-flights-and-foundlings.html
We have three enormous butterfly bushes that are covered with butterflies, bees, and hummingbird moths from the appearance of the first bloom until the last. The bush has been the focus of a lot of my butterfly photography. I have lots of b’fly photos on my photo site. Next time you get a chance, stop by and peruse the pages. I’ll be by shortly to take a read of your submission!
Lovely poem and thoughts. Summer cooled here, but it is a long way from over.
Thinking of you dear! I have time issues as well. Seems it goes by too fast.
Enjoy the day.
Thanks Angelia! What a summer it has been! Hope you are doing well!
Very good.
Such insidious, gray thoughts are snatched away
by the appearance of a swallow-tailed butterfly.
This I simple Love!
Thank you, Cathy!
Beautiful, Paula! I especially like “I wonder at such persistence through the / fraying nicks of daily struggle,…”
Thank you.
You always give me such kind comments! Thank you for taking the time to drop by and read my Wordle submissions – what a job to try to plow through them all and leave comments! Don’t ever feel obligated to read all of mine – but I enjoy it when you do (and understand when you don’t!).
Paula. You paint pictures with words for the imagination of those lucky enough to read!
Oh, Dannie! You are so good for my soul! I think I’ll get a pocket-sized version of you and keep you in my purse of pocket to pull out when I need you! I’d put one of those “Chatty Cathy” pull-out strings in the back and make this comment along with all the others play back for me on those times when I receive really harsh comments (not here, of course – people are too nice) that, basically, always tell me to go back to the drawing board. They are giving me what I have asked for, and I appreciate the time they spend on reading and commenting on my work and offering their suggestions, but every once inn a while, it’s nice to read comments like yours, and be helped to feel that maybe I can or will be a poet someday!
Hope all is well with you and all of Thailand. Our son misses it so!